Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Radio Commercial

12-20-11PagnottaCommercialFinalExport by OPagnotta

12 comments:

  1. I liked how you showed the diffrent uses of the IPad for diffrent kinds of people. The music was a very nice touch. (And good job Mr.Pistone)
    Liked this one a lot.

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  2. Really good job! I think the commercial can relate to many families and the music in the background fit the commercial well. Also, the commercial was clear and well written.

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  3. Great quality script, and it highlights the iPad's features well, but the call to action was a little fast and hard to understand.

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  4. Great script! I liked how you used a boy and girl point of view. But i thought the ending was a little rushed.

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  5. i liked the commercial alot. it was a good story line, i kinda feel like the music at the end didnt match the beginning of the commercial

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  6. Really good commercial. I liked the background music; subtle enough yet fitting.

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  7. Good job. i really liked the ending it was really funny

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  8. Sounds realistic. People could relate to this. good job

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  9. I love your commercial! It sounds really good and you had a lot info that made you understand it's features and what it does.

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  10. I felt this was good and your really drawing attention to the age group! Great job.

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